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Spidey vs Goblin by ~dlxcsccomicartist:icondlxcsccomicartist:

Categories Cartoons & Comics > Traditional Media > Cartoons > Drawings

©2004-2009 ~dlxcsccomicartist
:icondlxcsccomicartist:

Artist's Comments

Here is a lil action scene for heavy crtiqueing. Thanks for all the support guys :) :P

[link] this is a colored version done by the great Seree :)

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~StarshotGray Oct 24, 2004, 11:05:09 PM
That is an extremely nice piece of art!
One thing for critiquing, Spidey's right arm seems to "Merdge" with Goblin's body, making it a bit hard to understand...
Other then that, that's great!
-Star
:icondrakengel17:
~Drakengel17 Oct 24, 2004, 11:11:01 PM
I can devently see its you again Like it al ready but still Where is the freaken color

For the rest keep it up

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The Drakengel is not the angel
of draken's but a angel of dead
:icondlxcsccomicartist:
~dlxcsccomicartist Oct 24, 2004, 11:44:30 PM
Color hmmm....Color away bud i cant color for crap hehe...i am looking for a colorlist though :)
:icondlxcsccomicartist:
~dlxcsccomicartist Oct 24, 2004, 11:48:17 PM
Yea i see what you are talking about will do better next time :) Thanks for the critique i always enjoy learning from my mistakes and it is hard to see them but from anothers eyes it helps!! Thanks for saying it is extrememly nice :D
:icondrakengel17:
~Drakengel17 Oct 24, 2004, 11:56:00 PM
I can't help it i wanne see color i also used to work in black and with but in color it gives it a second dimension and then it will not be as flat as it looks like.
And wat do you think?

--
The Drakengel is not the angel
of draken's but a angel of dead
:icondlxcsccomicartist:
~dlxcsccomicartist Oct 25, 2004, 12:00:55 AM
yes color does add dimension i agree!! Maybe we will color some of these if noone else want s to when we get our submisions done :)
:icondrakengel17:
~Drakengel17 Oct 25, 2004, 12:02:04 AM
Oke we agree on the color level look at my comic now thats in color

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The Drakengel is not the angel
of draken's but a angel of dead
:icondlxcsccomicartist:
~dlxcsccomicartist Oct 25, 2004, 12:03:39 AM
sure will as soon as i am done with these comments :)
:iconmrvalentine:
~MrValentine Oct 25, 2004, 6:09:22 AM
Holy hell, I swear your stuff looks like it popped straight out of "the Amazing Spider-Man"

It does look a little crowded, though -- the buildings sort of look like they're closing in on the characters and give the drawing a cramped feel.

The legs look a little small, too...

though I am generally a poor judge of that kind of thing...
:icontheglome:
~TheGlome Oct 25, 2004, 11:30:55 AM
Awesome.

Your comic art is spiffalicious. Some of the best i've seen on DA, really...
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